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......
heartbreak.....
I never thought I’d learn the word...
never thought I’d be betrayed...
like those girls in the movies...the girls on tv...
I never thought....
they would become...
me...
“I’ll never be so foolish...”
I thought...
“As to fall in love with someone
who would do such a thing...
as to break my heart”
....
but then
I met you.
I thought you were grand...
I fell in love...
and I never thought I’d be deceived...
...
and I never thought...
it’d be by you.
...
as time went by, your eyes began to stray...
falling on another...
another girl...
not me...
and all the nights I cried...
I feared your heart...
was hers...
although she took no notice..
she would never be yours...
her heart was of another...
one who wouldn’t make her cry...
oh, how lucky she was...
so much luckier..
than I...
...
for though you said it wasn’t true,
[the key word there is “said”...]
that everything I thought and felt..
was simply of my head...
these things were lies....
I wish I’d seen...
but I believed...instead.

and then the truth, that I found out...
was an arrow through my heart...
knives and spears and bowls of tears...
that struck me as a poison dart...
you cared for her...you always did...
always...
more than me..

...

and now I know what heartbreak is...
now I know it well...
and it’s just as they described it as...
this heartbreak...
....
it is hell.






~Louise W.
1/18/04






“No guy’s worth crying over, and when you find one who is, he won’t make you cry.”
                                                                                                                    ~Unknown
....I just wrote this after finding out something that...broke my heart....if you want to know what happened, refer to my journal....

...
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crazycat007 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
I feel alot like this now.... you'll find someone better...
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emotitude Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
“No girl is worth crying over, and when you find one who is, she won’t make you cry.”
:disbelief:
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ArtFrEaK331 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: I just went through this two girlie. I'm sorry.
TwT it sucks.
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LehKitteh Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
ugh why was i so emo back then, wth...
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mintyoreo Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2008
xD
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DavisJes Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful poem.
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Muki-chan Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2005
This is wonderfully done. I love how you ended the poem here. :+fav:
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frosty-raven Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2004
:hug:

im sorry! This poem was really good and really sad, and it got your feelings through. I really hope things get better, i do!
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LehKitteh Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2004
ty so much!! things aren't really changing...I mean I don't think the guy descripted in this poem has changed his views about anything...but I'm *trying* to learn to accept it...just trying!! x.x;
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